what is this thing?

what is this thing?

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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A graphic from Frieda

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He picked it up
in his engineered hand
spun it round
the earth quakes rattled
the tidal waves drowned
he didn't hear a sound
he didn't hear their screams
he didn't have ears like Horton

and when the blue ball
came to a stop
on a far off alien planet
God looked at it
and said,
oops, I have to start all
over again ...




© 2016 Lyn Anderson


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A bit vague, but there is a hint of humour in your lines. It is pleasing as a read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

It was a challenge to write specifically to this graphic, and that is what I came up with, thanks fo.. read more
Love it
I really like your sense of humour.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much. It is a challenge to write to a graphic that someone sends me. I enjoy exercising my.. read more
It's earth for heaven sake, why is he shaking it like a snow globe!
Very funny, good clever write. :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Well done. You're like a machine. :-)
Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thank you, that's what the gander said too, lol.
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

I knew there was more to the story.
Looks like he goofed the second time around too....ha I can't stump you, but I won't give up! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

All righty, throw em at me.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I'm searching high and low, you're too good..............
Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Aww, thanks, I try to be.

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Added on July 15, 2014
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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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