sun drop

an inspiration on a rainy day turned sun

Once
I
held a
Sun drop
that was
you (it)
 

Split
the atom
that was
my heart
in
two.

Author's Note

I changed the format on this thought, while keeping the metaphor the same.

Reviews

[Papaya]

I read this two years ago. wow.
My comment stills stands. I like it. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you kindly my lady.

[Papaya]

My pleasure. :)

[sharonlee]

Succinct and very potent... intense little heart-stopper.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for dropping in

[Matching Socks]

Nicely done. : )
Love the subtle revision.

on the bright side babe...
Now you can share your heart with TWO men.

You've got such a big heart that there's enough for more than one right?

[Lyn Anderson]

ha ha, now the secret's out, I am just waiting for the right opportunity ...

[Matching Socks]

This just keeps getting better. :)

[Ruth]

Metaphorically this is mind blowing, flow wise, just steals the breath, gorgeous x

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, I appreciate that, especially from one who is so adept at metaphors, in my opinion.

[Ruth]

I appreciate your words too hon, thank you so much x

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Always my pleasure sweets. xo

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Ah what a nice little inspiration… a wonderful metaphoric analogy.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much, I still am playing catch up and will spruce it up in a bit ...

[Delmar Cooper]

Nice image- thought. That atomic heart. I have heard what happens when you split an atom, and I have heard what happens when a heart is broken into two. Pity the poor scarecrow. Pity more the poor heartless tin man, who has a brain that can ponder his loss.

[Lyn Anderson]

You are brilliant, and I appreciate your stopping in, always.

[ron]

Ooo nice one KL :).......

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for noticing by little sun drop.

[ron]

You are most welcome KL :)

[||||]

Very good for a minute one

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much, sometimes a little says a lot.

[Matching Socks]

Love the thought.
Super charged...
RR me if you make changes.
It stands up though.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes it will be tweaked later hard to post from phone

[Matching Socks]

Don't text and drive on your way to church... :)