vain is the jester all he wants is the crown incidents of treachery liars and leches abound lose tongues licking their lips awaiting the death of the king never suspecting a thing courtesy eludes him observation is his foe unreality will be discovered resting comfortably for now till his guilt be found.
Many kinds of crowns. I like how you led the reader into places of treachery and question. You left me with more questions than answers. I believe the person real purpose will be found. Guilt is easily tripped over. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
It is my pleasure to read your work, and I feel honoured you would read me.
I guess it could be loose but I was trying to be clever as in losing their tongues, guess it got los.. read moreI guess it could be loose but I was trying to be clever as in losing their tongues, guess it got lost in translation, I will repair it momentarily for clarity's sake, thanks for pointing that out ... don't I say it gently enough dear? Or do I need to be even cuddlier?
10 Years Ago
Whoa? Are you offering me cuddles, you know ppl are ALREADY talking... :)
You're the best. .. read moreWhoa? Are you offering me cuddles, you know ppl are ALREADY talking... :)
You're the best. :)
10 Years Ago
You know, the funniest thing is how that seems to be every man's fantasy, but honestly, they never b.. read moreYou know, the funniest thing is how that seems to be every man's fantasy, but honestly, they never believe us when we tell them the pillow fights are really just pillow fights :)
It's cuz they think you're talking in metaphors...
Stop hanging out with poets.
10 Years Ago
I only hang with them in here. I dumped my poet for a much less intellectual man.
10 Years Ago
:-) sometimes for the best. Poets are unpredictable
I think they're so in love with drama tha.. read more:-) sometimes for the best. Poets are unpredictable
I think they're so in love with drama that they try to create it.
I write under a pseudonym.
I don't do Read Requests, but you can PM me if you want me to read something specific. I make friends with people who I read and interact with. I won't accept random reque.. more..