when I roll over

more random misty memories floating the ether

When I roll over,
and you reach for me,
that is real.

When I roll over,
and you softly laugh
as I snuggle in to the
breath in your chest,
that is real.

When I roll over,
and you pull me in,
that is real.

When I roll over,
and you won't tell me
you are just denying
what we both know,
is real.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhh very fine ... very real love poetry! we men are like that ..no denying it ... scary scary you know !? ;) i enjoy the simplicity of this one ..yet it has sensuality, smooth gentle emotion and gives me a warmth in my center :)
E.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. I appreciate that. Now please, indulge me my political anger and read my "Caught with his burqa down"

[Einstein Noodle]

:) no problem ... but i think this one is one of my favorites of yours ..

[Pryde Foltz]

Oh those men who keep things to themselves. Loving write:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much.

[Papaya]

Copying and pasting my review from two years ago.
Happy to be taken back to this one.

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The last verse leaves the reader wondering what won't he tell.

Is it the love,
Or the end of love.

Again you've left it to the reader to relate to based on their own current state of mind.
Is the glass half full, or half empty? :)

Loved this KL, you're masterful.


Posted 2 Years Ago

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you darlin! I too liked this one a lot. Damned netbook pulled an "I need to recharge deal" in middle of reorganising. :)

[Papaya]

Ill prepared... You'd make a terrible bog scout.

[Lyn Anderson]

yuppers. I was kicked out of Brownies, actually. A funny story I should write down.

[Sami Khalil]

This splendid poem tells me there are two types of rolling over: One is with acceptance and the other is with denial...An excellent one...:)...................

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for stopping by and your review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ...:)))).....

[Madalyn Beck]

Wow. This is powerful. Easy to relate to and, for me, it touched a soft spot. Beautifully penned. xo :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, thanks, I appreciate that

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think the first three stanzas tell it all...i feel he isn't verbalizing the feelings...but he shows love..
especially the third stanza...he pulls her in...if it was the end..i think he would roll over the other way.

but just my thoughts...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think the first three stanzas tell it all...i feel he isn't verbalizing the feelings...but he shows love..
especially the third stanza...he pulls her in...if it was the end..i think he would roll over the other way.

but just my thoughts...

[Lyn Anderson]

There goes one of those glitches. Got a two for one review! Thanks.

[Lydia Shutter]

Sometimes the words don't have to be said.....because the actions say it all. This sure sounds real to me! :) Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for your thoughts as always.:)

[Matching Socks]

The last verse leaves the reader wondering what won't he tell.

Is it the love,
Or the end of love.

Again you've left it to the reader to relate to based on their own current state of mind.
Is the glass half full, or half empty? :)

Loved this KL, you're masterful.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. I think I intended a bit of both -- sometimes it is either way.