misty

randomly dropped words onto paper, not so random, an irritation to purists everywhere

static              
                misty
memories
                          cloud
my
                                      hindsight
myopic
                         predictions
litter
                                 the
future                           
                 prospect's
             chances

Author's Note

I know this one will annoy people, so have at 'er

Reviews

[willweb]

I think this is very good. I like the message and the way you have presented it. I enjoyed this very much.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks as always

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words. I do a similar thing to create poetry. I will write down aline from a song, poem or story. Later create a poem from the litter of words and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

I feel honoured by your extended visit. Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

It is my pleasure to read your words. I have been working too hard. I'm catching up.

[Rita L. Sev]

Read a few different ways, there's more than one poem here - very cool. Coleridge said that poetry is "the best words in the best order", but it is up to the poet to determine those words, and that order. This make the reader think, KL - that makes it a good write. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. I am glad you picked up on that. It took me a bit to figure out the exact configuration.

[Frieda P]

You're write, you're annoying. ;)

[Lyn Anderson]

I love you too ...:)

[Frieda P]

Muah! Took me a while, you're a clever pain in the aarse though. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

speaks ye she devil of the apostroliphic romanticism ...

[Frieda P]

Hahaha

[Lyn Anderson]

I have come up with so many apostrophisms since I met you ...

[Frieda P]

I know, I think I like this one the best....

[Pryde Foltz]

My suspicion … captcha had a hand in it. Wise words from chaos.

[Lyn Anderson]

thanks so much for your review

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i'm not a purist...i like pure violation of form...
the words litter the page like the predictions litter future prospects.

nicely woven with theme and form (?) ha ha...

good job, KL.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. There is a certain logic to it, just not sure who follows my crumbs ...:)

[Pryde Foltz]

There's the inspiration … lol … what you two get up to.

[Sami Khalil]

It looks like a world puzzle of sorts. Bravo.................

[Lyn Anderson]

It is only not a puzzle to me ...:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks for taking the time.

[Sami Khalil]

Ok. You are welcome(talking about the form)

[Matching Socks]

This is really A.D.D. friendly...
You finally completed that sensitivity training. Thank you!

Now I can store those words into neat little packets and file them away in my random access memory.
Bravo!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. I was in a mood. :)

[Matching Socks]

I like it. : )
It's like decoding a hidden message.