a million sorrows

inspired by Poppy "Held Close"

I read
and weep
and dream
and in an instant
ride the parallel
tracks of life
we share
heartaches
and wonders --
my thoughts
are divided
and strained
and sub-divided again
into a million sorrows
begging to be released.

Author's Note

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/PoppySilver/1370518/
Poppy inspires me ...
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Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Ah yes I have a poem I did from one of hers that inspired me
to write it.


Beautiful sad yet Breathtaking.



Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.



I loved these Stanza's lines.

my thoughts
are divided
and strained
and sub-divided again
into a million sorrows
begging to be released.



Blessings. kindred poet

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, thank you so much for such a thoughtful review.:)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're quite welcome. it's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet

[Delmar Cooper]

Laugh an the world laughs with you; weep and you screw up your eyeliner.

[Lyn Anderson]

How did I miss this? Damned phone. Anyway, I love your sense of humour.:)

[icelandicblue]

We are splintered but long to take all those parts and piece them together if only we could release the heartache. I like the format and the imagery in this piece.

[Lyn Anderson]

It is easy to be inspired by Poppy.

[Neville]

Delightful....................Yes indeed

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. I appreciate it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

poets inspire me just as well....we do seem to live in parallel worlds don't we...all poets in some way...

all writers...i used to do poetry workshops for the heartland writers guild in Missouri....we would all get together for a weekend...novelists, poets, agents, editors, and others...all who deal in some way with writing...and for most of us it is the best time we ever spent..we were with others who really understood us...

[Lyn Anderson]

That is what makes this place special, isn't it?

[Ruth]

Wow, heartprints hon! Made me delve into the reflections we both seem to share - beautiful piece. A holding of the whys and the thoughts that circle and circle with them, so many thoughts and cycles to it all. To be heard and more than that, to share emotion, is a blessing - thank you love, truly ♥

[Lyn Anderson]

You are infinitely welcome.