Apologetic

Loosely based on one of my new favourite songs ...

Forgive me,
I am unapologetic.

Something you sensed
just wasn't copacetic,

I might have been
more than just apathetic,

following frenetic suppositions
erratic suspicions
angry derisions
decisions
to deceive
and disbelieve,
till one day
fact met fiction,
and I happily
ate your prediction
lapping greedily
at the corners
of your affliction,
assuming your darkest
visions --

I am sorry,
I am unapologetic
for taking back
me.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

You are a fantastic writer! I love the flow of this and the word use just gave it that much more. Never feel sorry for taking yourself back. I really like that. Great job!!

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, thanks so much. I used so much verbiage due to the supposed intellectual superiority of the person to whom no apology is warranted.

[MsJewel]

Your creativity shines in this well written little gem. I like your unique style!

:) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. The feeling is mutual.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

such a really cool use of sound in this poem...really gives it attitude.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. That was what I was trying to accomplish.

[Sami Khalil]

I love this and how clever you wrote it. Bravo........................

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for your review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................