dark side of love's third moon

inspired by Jacob, I just had a chance to jot it down

He divorced the sun
and I divorced the dark side of
love's third moon --

After a lifetime of low tide
he says I spoke too soon --

There is nothing left to save,
and it is way past high noon.

The sun rises without compunction,
and it's just another day there
on the dark side of the moon.

Reviews

[MsJewel]

Love the metaphor in this well written little gem.

:) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much

[jacob erin-cilberto]

pretty cool write...shades of Pink Floyd...

love that word, "compunction"----

[Lyn Anderson]

I am glad you approve of what I did with your line ...:)