Chuck bucket

not for the weak stomach

Clutching your chuck bucket
by the side of your bed
Purging your lies
dredged from the ooze
inside your head
pleading your cries
you did not want to lose
without me you'd
be better off dead --

and that may well be true
but I
am better off
without you
and your stupid bucket.

Reviews

[Muse]

Ha ha, like seriously, I just ate, so I don't know why I felt compelled to click and read this one! Words can become septic and turn into bile. I guess that's why they call it word vomit. lol

[Lyn Anderson]

ha I like you. Thanks for stopping in.

[Rita L. Sev]

Amen... better off without regurgitated falsehoods. A graphic message, well done KL!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much, and sometimes the yuck just has to be said, plain and loud.

[David Scott]

Lies are like vomit... Vile indeed.

[Lyn Anderson]

Lucky me I got both.:)

[Madalyn Beck]

Nice, KL! I really enjoyed this one. It hit home for me and I can't thank you enough for that write!!

You are a brilliant master mind when it comes to weaving words together! xo :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much, as always.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Not trying to laugh but yea!!!! Its just how its taken not seeing the tags, No1 need to be in that hell, Id lift a ladies hair any day if it were a simple sickness,but I have no pity for drugs nor some1 don't want help. Solid write M:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, yep, you get it.

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Smilesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Bright Ocean Star]

KLG, this one is great! It is so easily identifiable (to me at least). My oldest just tied one on a little bit harder than ever before and needed this bit of equipment accessible just the other night. My college days were spent avoiding the male dorm, because it always smelled so incredibly bad Sunday mornings... and I love your strong personality and need for self preservation that radiates so well here. Great write!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

OMG you crack me up, I love the witty self empowerment that radiates from your words.

[Lyn Anderson]

That made me smile. I know it's a little "gross" and all, but the actions that precipitated this thought were too ...:)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

I bet it was, glad you are taking it on by writing it out.

[Delmar Cooper]

There seems to be no redemptive quality in confession. No real reason to purge the lies.

[Lyn Anderson]

Especially when the confession is not accompanied by amends. Once again, you are correct.