I see

from a distance

I see
and I want
him near
even if
he is
busy
with someone
else
I see
do you
see me?
Of course
you do.
And will
you stop by?
perhaps today
again
the afters
perhaps
not
but I see
and so
does he

Reviews

[Papaya]

Reminds me of an Alanis Morisette song, Ironic.
Meeting your soul mate while he is busy with someone else.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, I think that happens sometimes. I so appreciate all these visits to my oldies. I never realized how much I wrote here before I happened upon you and your wonderful writing.

[Papaya]

Yeah. You've got A LOT. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I am now through approximately 800. I have 350 more to go. :)

[Claire in VA]

I have been in this situation recently.
For me, it's difficult.
I really like the shape of your text!
How fitting!
Claire

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much, yes, it is difficult.

[Madalyn Beck]

You both see each other for you who both are. At least, that's my take. Beautiful, KL! xo (:

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well ain't that just not good.Sometimes you can't be with your person and that is hard.Excellent poem cat Wanna go for a coffee ?

[Lyn Anderson]

I hope to go for a coffee in the near future. Busy busy.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay pen me in whenever you got time ya hear :)

[MAC]

a well written piece that reflects the situation perfectly

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, thanks, I appreciate that.

[ChemicalMadness]

i'm here...what else is there? can you give? or does that matter....does anything? because i've already shown....i'm here. not close, but i'm here...so close. and maybe then the question isn't can you...but do you...or maybe will you.....lots of questions here...

i enjoyed this. thank you, KL.

CM.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much for stopping by.

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting situation in the poem. Left the reader with wonder and question. I like the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for your kind review -- always.

[redflutterby]

Sigh...you both see the other but it doesnt mean you're in the same room. Sometimes life gets in the way and we must wait for what little time we will get with that special someone. Its hard...but hopefully worth it. Great poem....

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much for stopping by. I must be sleeping now. I have lots of poems to write, but few hours to write them in.:)

[ron]

I wish I had some perspective to relate to this piece...but sadly I do not -sighs-
It is a beautifully written poem and gets the point across.

[Lyn Anderson]

I know that feeling. Trust me, I do.:)