a simple senryu

as it seems

The simplest of words
Lift the heart to the heavens
Or drag it to hell

Reviews

[Neville]

Yeah... Spot on. Nuff writ okay.... N

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow. Thanks again.

[Bluefire]

Words can either be the weapon or the healer. So true.
Well done!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much.

[Bluefire]

You're welcome! ^^

[Claire in VA]

So true!
And your words here do a fantastic job doing just as the subject matter indicates.
Claire

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, thanks so much for your extended stay. I must return the favour when I am up to it.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well that is the truth.Words have so much power.They can lift us high or break us,awesome as always cat :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww you are so sweet. Thanks.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Welcome luv :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very true quote. Words can take us to paradise and hell. Sometime in the same sentence. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

Sometimes in the same sentence indeed.

[sharonlee]

Exquisite impact, beautifully composed.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much

[Brianna Brie]

Your word choice is strong and drives home the point. Well done!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for stopping by

[Ruth]

Damn awesome! Nothing more needed, nothing more to say - says it all x

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much for your extended stay. I read all of your reviews from my phone and am touched. I especially liked that you went back to some of my first posts. I really appreciate that, and you are a fabulous writer, so that makes it even all the more special to have your comments. I think you and I have similarities. Another far away sister. :)

[Ruth]

My pleasure love...I think we do too, you are most welcome....I enjoy your writing a lot and always love to visit your page :) Have a sparkly day love x

[Baby Ricochet]

Now that's a profound senryu...................

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, thank you so much.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awesomesauce, great senryu… words can be a harmful weapon or a healing potion.
Once they are out they can not be taken back so choose wisely what you say.

[Lyn Anderson]

The hardest thing in the world to do is take back a hurtful word, for sure. Thanks, I do believe that is the first "awesomesauce" I have procured.