KLUTZ

am I clumsy?

I am
obsessed
possessed
impressed
undressed
redressed
blessed
helpless
hopeless
fallen
again
oops

I am such a klutz.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Another accident prone soul? I can't be the only one lol Unless this is, of course, relating to the heart, and intoxication of the heart strings, then just as cool :) x

[Lyn Anderson]

it's both literal and not.

[Chloe_Spence]

A simple yet humorous piece- I enjoyed reading :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Why thank you for your review.

[Chloe_Spence]

You are welcome :)

[kublakhan27]

Every day, I'm convinced at least once that I cannot get out of my own way, not in a physically klutzy way though, a mental one. It's like you've summed up a day in my life with this simple and very direct piece. There are few words but every single one carries a world of significance. Things don't change a whole lot for me from day to day, and that's what I took from this piece as I read it with my own eyes. One of my favourites for sure...awesome piece K.

[Lyn Anderson]

I have both problems, in spades:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol sounds familiar Kit Kat :)

[Lyn Anderson]

You are clumsy too? :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I have an uncanny ability to trip on flat ground lol.It vastly amuses my husband :)

[Frieda P]

As long as you haven't regressed, it's all good....watch your step hon ;)

[Lyn Anderson]

Ahh, at moments my anxiety kicks in, but not regressed in that way, NO.:)

[Madalyn Beck]

Hahaha! You know how we have too much in common? 'Nuff said. xo (:

[Lyn Anderson]

My twin from another life.:)

[Bright Ocean Star]

This is really good. It made me laugh. Thank you, KL

[Lyn Anderson]

You are welcome. I try.:)

[Bright Ocean Star]

Did you intend the outline of this poem to roughly resemble a woman's figure?

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, I did. I was going for that.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Very clever...:)

[redflutterby]

Hell I'm lucky if I can walk across the room without tripping over something anymore!! You left something off your list....you are a fantastic poet!! Lol...;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, thanks so much. I feel all gushy inside.

[redflutterby]

Haha...well I do have my moments of gushy effect...;-)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. You are amazing in all aspects. Bravo..............

[Lyn Anderson]

That is so lovely of you to say, thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................