The language is lovely. The imagery is very much the conversation of nuances trying on seductive intimate wear, knowing they will never be willing to pay the price, or dare to wear it in public.
This is a sensual playful tease of a poem, and its wonderful just to enjoy its pleasure.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for perusing this little piece. Funny, it brought back a lovely memory.:)
So I guess there's no sense in asking if the "she" is you and the "he" is somebody on this site - smile. Why are you being a tease KL-smile? The very fact that you profess that you are not telling make inquiring minds want to be all up in your business ;).
I am back but almost blind so will be briefer than I actually intended to be.
This little peach of a poem is really very special, it flows so well, its clean,
well stated, perhaps even understated. It will make the reader think, ponder and reflect.. I am also sure that it will be re-visited from time to time by many, including myself, my literary friend.
All Good Things, N
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much for stopping by, in your condition no less ...:)
mmm...understanding this concept too well... sometimes it is not knowing why that makes it all the more exciting. Incised by a mind and spirit, it is so much harder to control those kind of crushes, in my opinion. Wonderful write, as always. :)
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