Paper chains is such a great title. It really is just a piece of paper.
If we aren't married in our hearts then the paper means nothing more than you can file taxes together.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
You have that exactly right. Thank you for the lovely review!:)MWAH!
I like the honest and directness in the poem. A lot of hidden story in the statement. Funny how people are kinder when they need something. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my friend.
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Relationship is more than just a contract, or a pledge, or a certificate. If its not true love and no commitment any relationship is bound to fail and lost. Paper may not mean a thing. If its not written in the tablets of our hearts.
Nice! Yes, paper can hardly change how a person is going to teach you. People treat you the way they want to moment from moment and a paper will have little affect on their future behavior.
KL, you are a phenomenal writer and sister from another universe. Seriously, though I wasn't married, I've had similar experiences. Screw them all! xo :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I agree on the sisters thing. And thanks for compliment
Hmm I think they just like the power that that piece of paper gives them over us.Screw them I say when they had us they didn't want us but when we no longer belong to them we are all they can see.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you so much. I had trouble commenting from my phone and it kept this write unpublished half th.. read moreThank you so much. I had trouble commenting from my phone and it kept this write unpublished half the day. Arrgh. Computers.
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