fuel

fuel

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

you fill me up when I thought I was empty

"
Thought the tank was
more or less empty
came in spits and spurts
thought it had
ground to a halt.

but I should have known
you can't resist
pumping your venom
spewing your stench
slathering on your lies;
shaving the bits of me
from the face
of my happiness
without you.

you fuel me,
rev me up
and wind me;
each time you do it
you find me
a little harder
to infiltrate
than the time before.

From now on it's
premium fill only...
can't use me
to dump your load
anymore.




© 2016 Lyn Anderson


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That's a fine bit of counter venom. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thanks. Some of these old pieces went unnoticed, I think I wrote too much back then -- but it was a .. read more
A clever write with great metaphors using the gas station elements. I did not think men has a choice between regular, middle and premium. I do now...Excellent...:)..........

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Thanks as always
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)......................
I'm not sure why we ever settle for less than premium?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

I know why I did. And he lives in 1994 ---
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Good thing p***y got smarter....
breaking away from the vice-grip of a past lover, and spinning wheels in a new direction.

petal to the metal.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Pedal to the metal indeed. No looking back. Full speed ahead.

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Added on April 2, 2014
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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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