stuck to you

sometimes it isn't a good thing.

mud puddle
uggh!
sink in deep,
wipe off a
bug --

gum
paper
poop
goop
gloop
tar or
glue,

I am so damned tired
of being stuck to you.

Author's Note

ehem, wouldn't even call this a poem, more like a back ventilation of latent thoughts.

Reviews

[Maria12]

It conveys intense disgust..which seems appropriate

[Lyn Anderson]

Hello, and thank you for commenting on this historical poem.

[Maria12]

I shall come again a bit earlier.

[Papaya]

Haha! Love it!
I know it's serious underneath but I love your humorous delivery.

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh, most definitely intended as funny. The situation at the time was absurd.

[Madalyn Beck]

At first I was laughing, but the last two lines stuck to me like the damn mud in the beginning! I love this ventilation of thoughts! xo :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks very much for admiring my brain's outgassing.

[NeiL ArandA]

You penned it well KLG ... There is no bad piece or poem only bad poets . With your caliber . This is a good poem ...

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. Merci, Obrigada, Gracias -- hit any of your languages?

[NeiL ArandA]

LOL nope ... Salamat ...your so funny

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww, come on, we each speak 4 and none of them are the same? Hardly seems right ...

[NeiL ArandA]

Thank you will do ...

[Delmar Cooper]

Now there's a concept, latent thought, as though thoughts were like bullets, capable of remaining quietly in the chamber, unfired yet, ready.

[Lyn Anderson]

You would be the one to comment on my latent thoughts, I think you like inspiring me to fire those bullets -- away we go ...