wherever

a walk in the sun.

Blue eyes sparkling,
the only lines on his
face are the smiling kind ...

"Where to?" he twinkles,
offering his hand.

"Wherever," she says,
walking in the sun.

fantasy meets reality,
past and maybes
cease to matter,
heart in throat,
please don't shatter ...

he knows
he feels
he sees ...

and in that moment,
nothing else matters,
and in that moment,
he walks inside.

Reviews

[Delmar Cooper]

Really well said, the words are full of sunny days and excruciatingly green grass thanks.

[Lyn Anderson]

That is another poem worthy line. I love it, I am constantly pinging poems off your reviews. Keep em coming. Please.

[redflutterby]

Aww...this is sweet and romantic!! Sounds like a beautiful moment...when a person let's their guard down and allows another to open the door. Like this a lot!! ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks very much Red.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think he walks inside the speaker's head and heart.

nicely done...i like these short tight pieces.

they are a perfect moment of poetry.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much. I appreciate it.

[Frieda P]

Someone has that twinkle in their eye, or got really lucky haha....nice change of pace, hope this doesn't mean you're not going to write snarky anymore. ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh gosh no, my ex gives me plenty to serve up ...

[Frieda P]

Good to know, I'd miss hissy kitty.....