asocial wolves

a howling senryu

raised asocial wolves
forgot pack's proper order
howling all alone

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Wow, KL!! This is a great senryu! (And bitingly sarcastic, if I'm not mistaken.) I initially took it to be nature-related, but obviously it has deep symbolism (and if you read the tags, that seems true).

And thank you for entering this in the contest; I'm in the process of deciding the winners right now. That'll be a tough one, because there are so many great entries.

[Lyn Anderson]

I like to make my senryu's a pseudo haiku, if you know what I mean ...:)

[Eric Pudalov]

Yes, I definitely know what you mean! I hope you're OK, KL - you've had such dark poetry lately.

[Lyn Anderson]

Really? Dark? I think you need to read the last few. Nk

[s y e]

I loved this senryu, one of the best I've read.

[Lyn Anderson]

thank you so much.

[Baby Ricochet]

good senryu.........................

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks muchly

[Frieda P]

Howling good, did you know that cannibalism is common amongst wolves, and I think they eat puddy tats too, just saying...

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks so much. I have a lot of RRs to catch up on.

[Frieda P]

I guess your night was a success then. ;-)

[icelandicblue]

A lone wolf is truly alone always looking for her lost pack. We, like wolves, are not hard wired to be alone. I hope the howl brings a reply.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much, I was feeling packless.

[Lydia Shutter]

Are we raised or do we find what we need to raise ourselves in our environments? I wonder. In any case, good senyru. I liked it. lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha very nice cat.Got a smile out of me but I think you have found yourself a pack in WC so deal with it :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Ha. A pack of crazy wolves anyway.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well be that as it may Kit Kat you are loved :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

clever use of the senryu...

sometimes we just raise ourselves...and usually that does make us more or less anti-social.

[Lyn Anderson]

I suppose so. Thanks for your review.