smelly senryu

just a thought, or maybe it's technically a haiku, having nature and all --

saw a lovely skunk
gave him a really wide berth
memories of you

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha! makes me smile KL!! smelly senryu ... how perfectly irreverent ... i suppose he'll read this one too and accuse you again for writing poetry about him bruuuuuahahaha!
E.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, skunks are very literate in our part of the world:)

[Einstein Noodle]

love to you my friend!

[Lydia Shutter]

The hatred is so powerful in this one.....whether senryu or haiku. Do we learn lessons in life? We try to, but sometimes a skunk wears sweet perfume. It's tricky. I liked this. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. I never know how to label ones that are part haiku, part senryu, being both about animals and human nature.:)

[J. K. Beach]

Not very wistful
Not very wistful at all
Such a stinky skunk

[Lyn Anderson]

Ha, thanks, I think?

[J. K. Beach]

This relates to a previous post, but comments and reviews don't always seem to appear in order...

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, isn't this weird? I love it when it repeats itself so it looks like you gave the same person 4 reviews.

[J. K. Beach]

This site really buggers my browser. It' code is as cracked as I am. Not a good thing!

[Lyn Anderson]

You ain't kidding. It is a good thing the company is cool.

[Butch Decatoria]

Nice, the angry undertone cuts like a knife, must of been special hehe

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, special memories indeed.

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh, and thanks for stopping by. How rude of me.

[Butch Decatoria]

Your welcome, will do it more often....

[Frieda P]

Scooby doo waffles...you're too much! I don't know if it's technically either, but it rocks...ha

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks I liked it too.

[Tina Louise UK]

lol......love this one :) x

[Lyn Anderson]

so glad to make you smile.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha very funny. You are a very bad cat :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Black and white I is. Black and white.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Umm Hmmm :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Hahahaha. Can I borrow this; I know exactly who I want to send it to. Funny stuff.

[Lyn Anderson]

Absolutely. I always wanted to write a book of poems women could send to men and put their names on it.:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a sense the scent of very negative thoughts still creating an odor for this person.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes and whilst I am not a negative persom they are my armour

[Madalyn Beck]

I hate skunks. And why do they ALWAYS have to smell? Why can't they just keep it in their butts? :)