A glimpse into me, when I was away from the cafe' for less than an hour - a napkin jotting session --
across the sea
across the sea he came to me words on parchment faded by the sun he is there somewhere under the clutter inside a dark heart he shone a light for a moment across the sea.
a long time since she put pen to paper felt the words flow through and past her calloused finger --- like how she lets him linger, whispering past the echoes of her mind a desperate sheep looking for its keeper true to her true to be to good to be true he doesn't love me.
I am not in love with you. I love you. and somewhere truth lies in the heart of the beholder ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I should have known I couldn't trust you when you brought me marmalade and brie. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
fumbled
Reaching for her hand in the dark he fumbled found her heart.
this is sort of a glimpse into how I write and the creative process for me -- sort of a mad rambling on paper -- it's been a while since I actually used paper and not straight to type, it felt kind of good.
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i agree with sami, excellent random thoughts created perfectly. nice reading kara.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you. This is one of the first I wrote here in this style. As I tell people, I have always writ.. read moreThank you. This is one of the first I wrote here in this style. As I tell people, I have always written in related poetry groups -- and pulled them apart in the editing. Now, here, I keep the related thoughts together, as they were originally written.
I adore all these pieces into your soul! Especially pen to paper! You do such an amazing job at expressing yourself through writing. This is going under my favorites!! xo :)
Very deep and well thought out little pieces.
Seems like you really put allot of thought into what you write and the way you write it.
I enjoyed reading all that :)
Great write :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks, I actually think then jot, so it comes out as a very well thought out piece, thanks.
Such creative thought processes going on in that brain of yours, KL. This is a fantastic 'mad rambling on paper'. You should write more on paper, then!
Anyway, I was just wondering whether you mean "too good to be" when you typed "to good to be"...
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Nope -- been asked -- see review by Nusquam Esse below -- it is intended as a rambling thought, endi.. read moreNope -- been asked -- see review by Nusquam Esse below -- it is intended as a rambling thought, ending in me, and it is not TOO -- but I do understand why people might think that.
10 Years Ago
I see. I was thinking that might be a typo error since I know you as someone who is careful when it .. read moreI see. I was thinking that might be a typo error since I know you as someone who is careful when it comes to grammar and all... Thanks a lot!
Geez that must have been one huge dinner napkin...I love them all but you know the last one flipped me over and I landed on your fumbl'd heart!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks. I had fun. It's how I used to write all the time -- on scraps and bits with multiple poems a.. read moreThanks. I had fun. It's how I used to write all the time -- on scraps and bits with multiple poems and drawings in a row. I think I might do that more often, it actually was quite great. And yeah, the last one actually is the last one I wrote on that napkin.:)
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