The Bee Sting (by my little blanket girl)

This was written by my just turned 7 year old.

Ava was playing in the garden and she got stung by a bee. She tried to catch the bee. But the bee ran away. The bee was happy, and Ava was not. The end.

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Cute............................

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks.:) My daughter is thrilled with her reviews.

[MsJewel]

Absolutely adorable!

:) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. She was showing me her story, complete with drawings, and I asked if I could post it.

[Frieda P]

Cute, she's bzzzzin' in mama's footsteps....

[Lyn Anderson]

yeah, she is a funny kid.

[Frieda P]

The nut doesn't fall far from the tree and all that jazz...

[Lyn Anderson]

Nope. And it's fun but exasperating, raising a mini me lol

[Frieda P]

I know the feeling, I hate to admit that my crazy son is just like his mother....ha

[Lyn Anderson]

I would love him too then.:)

[Frieda P]

Mwah!

[Madalyn Beck]

Your 7 year old has some talent! I really enjoyed this! Definitely something from a child's perspective which made it so innocent. xo :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah, not looking forward to the teenage years, both kids are pretty darned good at spinning a yarn.

[NeiL ArandA]

That was awesome. She'll be a great writer one day. Just like you KLG ...

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. Both my kids write stories. And honestly, I can't begrudge my ex his talent -- he is a great writer too.

[NeiL ArandA]

Wow ... now I know why your so good. It runs in the family and in your genes ...

[Delmar Cooper]

Poor Ava, wicked and lucky bee. Sweet children,sweet story.

[Lyn Anderson]

thanks, I forgot to comment on your review. Bad kitty!

[s y e]

this is so cute. made me smile, KL.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. My kid wanted me to post something of hers.

[s y e]

Too cute, KL. Following mummy's footsteps.