ocd ramblings

that's what it is

obsessive compulsive
drivel snivels
in the darkness
of her mind
until it reaches
round and pulls
something special out
she looks at it,
rolls it in her fingers,
and tastes it,
just because ...

Author's Note

okay, yeah, I know the imagery, it actually came to me after teaching a class of grade ones a special lesson ...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

That is some gross OCD but funny though. I see where you get inspirations from...lol

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, well, I was teaching an animal care lesson to a grade one two class -- and voila! inspiration in the front row!

[Lyn Anderson]

ps thanks for stopping by

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome...:).....................

[Caradoc]

This is kind of priceless. Haha. You get extra bonus points for the starting letters of the first three words in this piece being "OCD". I love the stealth title drop in that. Although what really got me was those last four lines...gah! Tasting it...just because...shudder inducing image.

Overall though an awesome and entertaining piece my friend.

-Cara

[Lyn Anderson]

ha well, it niggled at my ocd for days you see - UGGH

[Frieda P]

Okay gross, I was alright with it till I spied the pic....kids. I like your OCD muchly better...

[Lyn Anderson]

ha ha my inspirational grade ones. At least it wasn't my kid lol ...

[Frieda P]

Now I'm confuzzel'd you teach on the side too. ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah I am a Jack of all trades -- just special classes requiring my expurrt opinion.

[Chris]

sure this one wasn't also for St. Patty's Day? It has the "green" in its own way.

[Lyn Anderson]

ha ha very funny. Funny. Kids inspire me.:)

[Chris]

chuckling here - they inspire us all...always shall.

[Madalyn Beck]

Oh my gosh!! Bahahaha, I busted out laughing at this!
I like that I can take this down other paths as well. You are something else, KL! Very enjoyable! xo :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Yep. That was the general idea. But the inspiration was, well, pretty mundane ...:)