ocd ramblings

that's what it is

obsessive compulsive
drivel snivels
in the darkness
of her mind
until it reaches
round and pulls
something special out
she looks at it,
rolls it in her fingers,
and tastes it,
just because ...

Author's Note

okay, yeah, I know the imagery, it actually came to me after teaching a class of grade ones a special lesson ...

Reviews

[Kai Rollins]

(Late late I know sorry) grade schoolers taught you this? I give them some credit. Why not kiddo?
Interesting write

[Lyn Anderson]

No sorry necessary. I was very inspired when I went to this classroom and saw that kid eating the fruits of her labours ...

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Cant say I ever did this lol, But a bag of dried dog food did fall in the floor when I was little, I did have some gravy train lol, Not very tasty !

[Lyn Anderson]

Interesting review, thanks for stopping by.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha very funny kitty .....:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Glad you liked it.

[ron]

OMG I've done that before, oh waite that was on a dare, never mind. Great poem this one made me giggle.

[Lyn Anderson]

Lol love that u admit it

[ron]

Lol........

[Jack...]

Oh my...this is disgusting and I loved it. That gives you an idea of who I am. KL, your wit, humor, sarcasm and view of life is mind altering to me. I love reading your poetry.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks alot sweetie. I do have a wicked sense of humour.

[Leslie Philibert]

Great ! clever, wicked humour...the best poem I have read for a long time..

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow thanks. That's awesome

[RichGee]

Hahaha! This is precisely the reason why I love poetry so much.
We can write about something like this and actually enjoy it.
Clever write. Nicely done.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, me too. Glad you stopped by.

[RichGee]

My pleasure

[m.s.early]

LOL... I just saw this knee high little guy by the salad bar. I stopped and stared at him as piercing as I could. He just stared back and never misted a twist of that probing forefinger. Very unique approach.

[Lyn Anderson]

thanks. I missed your review, sometimes it happens when the clicking of this and that skips over something.

[Rita L. Sev]

I have had this kid in my class... several times. Yep. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Aren't they adorable? LOL.