Lucy

read it get it regret it

He called himself
Luci-
fer
but he was just
a sissy
wannabe
He met her
he stuck his
steak
in her
again
and
again
made her
head
spin
but then
a fatal
mis
take
he pulled
it out
and she
came to
her senses
and wouldn't
let him
put it
in her
again.

Author's Note

ha ha lol -- do your worst. And yeah, the "steak" is intentional.

Reviews

[David Scott]

Nothing like some hot beef eh? Ha.
You are soooo bad.
I like how this has several interpretations. It is like an ink blot poem...
I guess you know where my mind went.
You are so funny. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

It is of course my intention to be funny and clever always:)

[Sami Khalil]

Maybe just checking the oil for he was a mechanic...lol
Just kidding. A clever write and empowering as a realization...:)................

[Lyn Anderson]

Interesting perception. Thanks for the review.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)....................

[Delmar Cooper]

I really hate it when they come out of the ether and see you as you really are. Drat.

[Lyn Anderson]

oh my you are a funny boy.

[Frieda P]

You're a sick chick, that's all I'm gonna say. ha.... ;-)

[Lyn Anderson]

noted and laughing ha ha

[Vidya Bacchus]

Firstly I love "steak" and secondly Lucifer's "steak must be one hell of a piece of meat.Kudos on her figuring out that he had "steaked " her enough :)

[Lyn Anderson]

It was more quantitative as in frequent, as opposed to qualitative that the author was trying to convey ...:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

More quantity than quality .I see :)

[Rob Santana]

Hahaha, damn KL you have a twisted mind .....I like that. I hate when girls do that. "No not anymore" kick rocks then!!! Haha.

[Lyn Anderson]

Sometimes you just gotta yank that steak right out if you want to be free.:)

[Stevo The POE-t]

I think this happens quite a bit when a man wants a woman to be his friend with benefits... I enjoyed it girl...

[Lyn Anderson]

Why thanks, interesting take on it, makes sense.