political asylum

offered and relinquished

Offered
under
false
pretenses
your
love
had
teeth
grinding
and
tearing
it
wasn't
a
clean
meal
you
prepared

when
you
offered
me
political
asylum
from
your
mind.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Funny I always feel as though I've been slapped upside the head when I read you KL...in a good way of course....

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks a lot. I like that. :)

[Frieda P]

Ha I knew you liked it rough ;)

[Kai Rollins]

Always a bit of learning coupled with your works, and for that I thank you.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. I love this one. Glad people are taking a loook.

[Sami Khalil]

Offered, granted, relinquished and given. What an asylum it was. Excellent...:)................

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much Sami for your review. I am happy this piece is being revisited.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)..................

[Alfred Kukitz]

Foxy in a political romance sort of way!

[Lyn Anderson]

Hmm, interesting review, thanks.

[Alfred Kukitz]

I'm having a hell of time with everyone. Thanks for your mind expanding mind!

[Lyn Anderson]

You are very welcome. I like enthusiasm.

[Cody Williams]

Short, sweet, and to the point. I really like the title. Thanks for sharing it KL!

-CW

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks, sorry I missed this review. My phone is uncooperative.

[Parimal Pratyush]

Short and easy to understand. But chaotic for the mind.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. That is what this poem is attempting to convey.

[John Anderson]

Beautifully expressed and nicely penned.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much for indulging my request.

[Jack...]

I love the form of this and many of your other pieces. Direct and to the point and still thought provoking.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. I like to say a little with a lot, unlike in real life, when I prattle on and on ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

there are ways to get around that political asylum...and it doesn't always work anyway...

pretenses can be spotted...asylum denied...or maybe we get driven so crazy, we end up in one.