Friccasee

there it is.

Fricasseed intentions
love's lost dimensions
encompass to include
what once it did exclude
betrayal's sweet denial
blade unsheathed
exposed coppery
red taste beneath
rushing rivulet's disbelief
lodged somewhere between
the ribs of her chest
the words of the one
who knew her best
snuggly rest.

Reviews

[Giggling Star]

Bloody good KL! :) ..........

[Brittany Zedalis]

Wow. This is wonderful!!!!

[m.s.early]

Deeply embedded. Crucial word choice. When I was kid a bit into a penny once to see what it was like. I can relate to that coppery taste.

[Kai Rollins]

I need a way to cut the tension....
Ha. Really this is partly why I love your works so very much. Bit like a knife edge. It's fun to dance with written death. Loved the power of this great job

-a fan

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is raw and packs a punch .This is snarky as hell and that is KL.

[Raymond Federle]

Great rhyme and flow...wonderful KL!

[A. Amos]

I just waiting all your writes take the real face of music, you will do very well..... Good job

[Lily Mae]

I love writes that vent the raw truth out of us:) well done..

[Scott Metro]

Goodness Miss Kitty...those are some strong feelings...
Your venom is dripping like oil under a Harley...
Enjoyed your beat down.

Scott

[Frieda P]

Now that's a whole new kind of recipe...ouch fricasseeing hurts like bloody 'ell...

[Lyn Anderson]

yes I was almost tempted to apostrophe it up, but that would be, too unlike me ...

[Frieda P]

Ermahgerd live a little ;-)