Called the doctor

for Vidya, who inspires me with her incessant use of commas, in mostly the right places:)

Called the doctor
just this morning
had a question
about her obsession
seems it's something
not quite catching
errantapostrophic
behaviourmiology
part of her biology --
but soon to be
recognized you see
in the book of
disorderly psychology
so she can't be
discriminized
for her insanity ...

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Yes we might get in trouble for misdiagnosing or mislabeling. Mentally challenge maybe ?

[Sami Khalil]

Doctor in the pic looks mad. He should be happy for all the right commas. Ha
A splendid poem...;)..........

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh my God tell me some of those are actual words .I am glad that my commas in the right place inspired you my dear friend even though you still have to mention the errant spaces ,you know you could just let them go.Absolutely funny as all hell KL.

[Lyn Anderson]

some real, some made up, and what the hell is wrong with your keyboard that it skips spaces? :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh d****t woman let it be :)

[Lyn Anderson]

I love you too :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha I know :)

[David Scott]

I like your freedom with creating words here.
Fun and playful.

[Lyn Anderson]

thank you. Working on that book just for Frieda (hear her rolling her eyes?)

[David Scott]

Yes, I wrote a poem titled "Freidarized Kimmerisms"... I understand. Silly girls... ;)