Goldfish wishes

a little fish wish

Goldfish circles
in her bowl
full of ideations
machinations
historical
recreations
she cannot
remember
the last go around
the bowl and wonders
is it all about me?

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Apparently, someone in here thinks this poem, and all my poems are about HATE. I don't see it that way, and I am the one that wrote them. And I don't think this site or any public website is an appropriate place to carry out personal attacks. Unlike this person, I will not call her out by name or publicly post things in that manner. I just want her to stop.

[Brittany Zedalis]

The problem with crazy people is they don't usually realize they're crazy, so they keep harassing and stalking because they think they're doing something right. *sigh* I'm sorry you dealing with it.

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes I guess that's how it goes.

[Matching Socks]

I have two young kids so all I think of are those goldfish crackers when I hear "goldfish". :)
I hope this Goldfish has a big bowl. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Ha ha. This particular Goldfish polluted all her bowls.

[Matching Socks]

Ha, this goldfish is so full of s**t....

[Muse]

lol, wow, reading some of he comments below. A simple gold fish poem stirring up some trouble. What did you do? lol

I wrote a poem once about a fish in the bowl. I think we all feel that way some days. It's like the "ground hog" effect. I'm just waiting to bump into myself someday...

[Lyn Anderson]

Yes, this one certainly was a simple piece that ended up causing quite a stir ...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like this...the goldfish is looking at us looking at her...center of attention...but her world is that little bowl and she thinks it is so important, at least from what she remembers...

great short piece.

[Sami Khalil]

Some people think the world revolve around them or remember not the humble beginnings. Some go in circles and miss on a lot of things in life...Bravo again on another great write...:)......

[Frieda P]

This resonates within my own little pond, jump on a lily pad, and eat that annoying mosquito for breakfast.