I would if I could

hey man, this is just what is pouring out of me.

I would if I could,
but I can't.
It starts out as a rose
it wilts on the page
It starts out as love
it boils in rage
It starts out hot,
it ends up cold,
It starts out as romance,
It goes gray and old.
I would if I could
but I can't.
Everything in my head
fills me with dread.

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Strange no one drop a single line here . This is good read and the rhythm really flows here. Simple but pack with so much lessons and " What If's " ... Conveys a lot of procrastinations...This is a well written piece. I wish I could have done it..but I can't because you're the only one who could really do it ...

[Lyn Anderson]

Very cool. Love it when someone pops in to review the previously unreviewed. I have been cranking them out like mad lately, I am sure some people think I have little elves on an assembly line, spitting them out. I can't help it, it's what I do when I am in a mood. I look forward to connecting with you more.

[NeiL ArandA]

Likewise my friend. Its a pleasure knowing you as well ...