toxic soup

toxic soup

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

yep, on that train

"
Treading
in your
toxic
soup
I can
barely breathe
the air -
I cannot
touch
bottom
nor sides
for fear
of them
sucking
me in.



© 2016 Lyn Anderson


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Some thoughts just have to have their own "voice".

Posted 10 Years Ago


Short and to the point, most awesome.

Posted 10 Years Ago


we can be so poisoned by others if we let them sink us in their toxins...

Posted 10 Years Ago


I heard the train whistle coming before I even got here....suck'd me in too. Right on point as always...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

I wish you would come back here.

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Added on January 19, 2014
Last Updated on August 16, 2016
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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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