dwelling in the dark

exactly what it seems

I
choose
to
dwell
in
dark
places
and
dance
in the
light.

Author's Note

Image: Liquid_Dancer_by_zepaulo

Reviews

[V]

I agree on this one too. Short but well-written.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you. I would think you would definitely understand and appreciate this piece.

[V]

I do appreciate it. Well I used to dwell a lot in dark places and still do regarding sensuality but other parts of my life have become much lighter - in various senses.

[Lyn Anderson]

That is good. Me too. Mostly.:)

[V]

That's nice. I'm glad to hear.

[ranscan]

As poetry is to boxing, so this is to a first round knock out. Concise and tight, so much power waiting to be freed.
Of course this is more about choice than nature, even in its sparse words the imagery is strong. Politely confrontational, a solid piece of work.
I admire those whom work with brevity.

[Lyn Anderson]

thank you, I appreciate that. This is probably one of my favourite short pieces.

[redzone]

it said 3 reviews but only two are seen... sounds like maybe someone doesn't appreciate short, sharp and very pointed poetry... you do have a nice way of making feelings snap on the page with force and elan...

redzone

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much. As I go along, I delete reviews that are from certain villains who shall not be named. They are false, and I would rather not have them on my page.

[Frieda P]

Perfect KL....doesn't get much better than this...dance on.

[Lyn Anderson]

thank you ever so much. I really liked this one, and was a little annoyed at all the passersby.:)

[Frieda P]

I"m having puter problems or I would have been by sooner..............welcome :-)

[Neville]

Magical,
you
know
just
how
I
like
it
dont'cha
?
N

[Lyn Anderson]

I am so glad you picked this one. No one had reviewed it yet:)

[Neville]

So am I dear Kat