molting

we'll see how this one develops

he tells
me
I am
shedding
"molting"
beginning
breaking
free.
I feel
it
slowly
painfully
transforming
it
isn't
always
easy
sometimes
I crawl
back
in
but
it is
happening
let
me
be.

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Bring it on butterfly. Wonderful example of form, KL.

[Goat]

This is so nice, I love all the metaphors in here! It tells a great story about changing into something even better. Nice job, this poem is awesome!

[willweb]

This was quite good. Shedding the old and welcoming the new. I enjoyed this.

[Lyn Anderson]

That's nice. Thank you.

[A. Amos]

Truly interesting piece and brilliantly written. Simply super ....

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for your review.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome

[highonwords]

this poem speaks to me about a person kinda rocking the boat because of his or her personal growth....thank you for sharing :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It is a process and following moulting comes re growth of fresh fur to protect and warm KLG. As always a smooth ride that trips off the page.