surprise

sometimes surprises can be nasty

She lived
on edges
walking
thinking
herself
smart
she liked it
hot
swearing
in the
face of
God
Hell
probably
wasn't so
bad -
and the devil
danced with
glee
at her arrogant
blasphemy
Hell is
individual, you see -
and waiting 
for her was a
special surprise;
a fire
that never warms
and ice
that never melts.

Reviews

[Darkgirl]

I really like this, very well wrote

[BlakeDuckers]

wow, i was just hit with the good poem stick. I barely read poems but i scrolled down continuously. Nice one!

[Lyn Anderson]

read on my friend, there's lots more where that came from.:) Thank you.

[Lyn Anderson]

I wrote one just because of this comment - see "hit me"

[Lyn Anderson]

I actually got the idea today - my job is outdoors, in minus 35, and I thought, damn, this is my idea of hell.

[Frieda P]

Oh this is killer KL....and the devil danced with glee, I've witnessed it personally. This takes me in so many directions, none good.