another life

more contemplations

in another life
you could have made me happy
not this one not here

Reviews

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Very deep, makes a statement:)

[Frieda P]

Hmmm, sounds like a forbidden love, perhaps in another life. Mindful and boggling in the same breath.

[Lyn Anderson]

Means a lot coming from you.

[Chris]

do double negatives work in Haiku? if so then two messages flow ..yin and yang in opposite tandem

thought-full

[Lyn Anderson]

Umm, not so good at following those particular types of rules - so for me they work:)