train

I just had to

Spent her life waiting
When the train finally came
She did not get on

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

Sometimes the train comes along too late - you are already going in another direction and can't turn yourself around. This one provides a lot of dreaming room. I liked it a lot.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So where was it going as it may have been the wrong destination?

[Chris]

Who's to say... just maybe she did and it was the station that pulled away and she watched her reflections in the windows of the still train as she left.

[Lyn Anderson]

I am starting to warm up to the interpretation thing. Somewhere Edgar is rolling over in his grave. - see "From his lofty Perch" for explanation - d****t, I have already written twenty odd pages - sorry to make you sift.

[Chris]

"Life is our perception ...I wonder how life perceives me." - Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like what Frieda said...perhaps yes, she's leaving on a jet plane and doesn't know if she'll be back again...

reminds me of "he who hesitates is lost"

it happens...and life passes us by..then we are left with "shouldas" and "wouldas" and "couldas"...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Maybe it just was'nt the right train at that time.Just a thought ,sometimes while waiting for something you realize you don't really want it any more.

[Lyn Anderson]

perspective, is everything.:)

[Lyn Anderson]

p.s. I won't correct wasn't. Yes I will.:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha you could'nt let it pass could you?

[Lyn Anderson]

And here is the nub of it: I am dying for you to comb through mine and catch me. Yes, "Down with the Sickness" as David Draiman says - tho he was not referring to my particular grammar affliction.

[Frieda P]

Being it's the journey that counts, this doesn't surprise me. We're always looking for the next best thing anywho, perhaps she took a jet plane. ;-)