border collie

you'll see

Poor bedraggled mutt
married the
Border collie
gotta run
so much fun
crazy circling
yapping
gotta go fast
gotta make it
last
come on
get up
let's do it again!
Poor bedraggled mutt
just couldn't keep up.

Author's Note

oh Gosh I am in for analysis on this one I am sure

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching and almost satirical piece, good read.

[Scott Metro]

Sounds just like a border collie.....zip...zap...zing.
Fast little devils and always ready to move and play.
Excellent.
Scott

[Lyn Anderson]

That she is, that she is.:)

[Scott Metro]

:)
S..................

[Vidya Bacchus]

This border collie reminds me of my ex husband he ran me into the ground ,just saying.You could actually just be talking about dogs .

[Lyn Anderson]

The bigger question is, why don't the two border collies just run around together? Opposites may attract, but in the end it will smack the relationship down, as you so aptly put.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You have a point there, but we tend to be so caught up in the the passion and the stars in our eyes that are blinding us that we don't realize until it is too late that they suck .

[John Alexander McFadyen]

What a dog!
As analogies go. Interesting self perspective.

[Tom]

The border collie is indeed a most versatile, energetic breed !

A rousing tribute to this intelligent canine ! ( I think ) ??

[Dispersus]

HA...it ain't 'bout no dog

ex-husband?!!!!!

[Lyn Anderson]

Yeah leave it to the veterinary professional in me to put it in those terms.:)