Like a blanket

just read it

My baby covers
me
like a blanket
makes
me
feel
warm and fuzzy.
My baby kisses
me
like a kitten
soft and gentle.
My baby loves
me
like no one else
does.
Her words fill
my ears
and I love the light
in her eyes
when she tells
me
 she "loves me to the moon and back"
My baby loves
me
and I love her
till
forever never ends.

Author's Note

this is NOT a google or other internet stock image.

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

I dig all of this KL, the repetition the playful tone the way you describe her and how she makes you feel.
'Till forever never ends'....yeah that's the business right there! A little like sneaking into my heart. Wish I could hug you I like this so much xo

[Lyn Anderson]

aww thanks. I feel the hug. My little ones are so precious to me. I am blessed, and I know it. No matter how things went with their father, I wouldn't have had them without the other.:)

[aLittlePain]

That sentiment is amplified in your writing, I deeply admire that and you!

[redzone]

okay, read it; liked it and it is way nice to love until forever ends...

redzone

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks I appreciate it.

[Claire in VA]

The love here is powerful! Makes me wanna snuggle with my baby girl!
~Claire

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The first four lines stumble, a word missing me thinks. But it recovers to be another interesting and charming piece.

[Lyn Anderson]

I missed the ME - I saw it in my head, I swear I did! Hurray for me trusty proofreader!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Makes me wonder if others really bother reading at all?

[Sami Khalil]

A great and lovely poem for a daughter perhaps . Soft and gentle love...Bravo.................