5840

on a roll

5840
times
you looked
into my eyes
and told me
lies
3285
times
you left me
to sleep
alone
542
times
you accused
when it
wasn't true.
I've got a lot
of making up
to do.

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

....but who's counting...LOL.
Know the feeling...sort of.
Maybe you should take up smoking pot and find a guru.....just kidding.
Being together can be lonely...hope you find a solution...lonely is hell....I know that all too well.
...any typos here........lol
Have a blessed day.
Scott............... :)

[Neville]

You certainly do. Deadly venom personified. No other way to do it.... A great write and expression of intent - I might just add a 'me' as an alternative to you accused ... N

[Joyce S. Greene]

I'd just stop counting and starting running in the other direction, if Ii were you, KL. Another very imaginative and dryly humorous poem. I liked it a lot!

[Vidya Bacchus]

I always wondered who was keeping score but apparently it is you KL lol.This is a sad piece to me .Keeping score to me means that I am lonely and alone if that makes any sense:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

2,042 times you will regret trying to make it up...better to move on 100 times infinity, then to dwell in that house of pain.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hey get some sleep!
Flowing and inventive verse!