three walked into a bar

you'll see

A leech
A flea
and a rat
walked into
a bar
chatting
casually
the leech
bragged
how they
never saw
him coming
and he
drank until his
fill.
"But when you get full, you fall off", said the flea,
"I work
my way in
multiply
and never leave",
he said proudly.
The rat smiled "but you make them itch",
he laughed
"and they use chemicals to boot you off".
"What about you?"
cried the leech and the flea.

"I am a rat",
said he, pretty as you please.
"By the time they figure it out,
I am already on to the next piece of cheese".

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

A crew of ugly creatures trying to one up each other, not a pretty scene but very original and witty, KL. I like your wry sense of humor. Great job!

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much. Considering the caliber of your writing, I am flattered.

[Scott Metro]

Funny....interesting....LOL....I was expecting some twisted 3 some.
Cute


Scott :).....x

[Lyn Anderson]

Cute? Really? What an interesting perception you have. I guess because you were expecting something of the erotic genre that could explain it.:)

[Scott Metro]

...I'm an easy mark....LOL

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha how do you come up with these wonderful pieces?Everyone thinks they are better than the other.I have an insane impulse to take your naughty ,naughty spatula and whack them all lol.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks man. I take that as a compliment coming from such a flowing beautiful writer. Our styles are so different - it makes for a great banter.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :P