thank you

thank you

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

once again you will see

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Thank you
for teaching me
to bleed
without asking
for a bandage.

Thank you
for teaching me
to cry
and cover it
with a smile.

Thank you
for teaching me
not to
want
need
expect
or like
anything.

You taught me so much.
I think I graduated.
Please go.



© 2016 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
Don't cry for me. It's just a poem.

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I think I graduated.
Please go.

Wellllll at least we know not to cry for you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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One of the things I like about this poem is that it is quite compact, yet speaks volumes and evokes a lot of emotion.

Posted 10 Years Ago


As 'just a poem' it has deep pathos and a raw and bitter taste to it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love your sarcasm and attitude in this poem! Also, it kind of reminds me of a song called 'Thank You' by Simple Plan :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Laura Harrison

10 Years Ago

You should :) it's like pop/punk if you're into that sorta thing
Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

Everything but country baby. :)
Laura Harrison

10 Years Ago

Ahh, with me it's everything but hip-hop and rap lol :)
but a good poem...

and insightful...relationships work much better when we don't have expectations. or get together out of need...it should be out of want, love, and acceptance of who the other person is...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 18, 2013
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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