thank you
A Chapter by
Lyn Anderson
once again you will see
Thank you for teaching me to bleed without asking for a bandage. Thank you for teaching me to cry and cover it with a smile. Thank you for teaching me not to want need expect or like anything. You taught me so much. I think I graduated. Please go.
© 2016 Lyn Anderson
Author's Note
Don't cry for me. It's just a poem.
Reviews
I think I graduated.
Please go.
Wellllll at least we know not to cry for you.
Posted 10 Years Ago
One of the things I like about this poem is that it is quite compact, yet speaks volumes and evokes a lot of emotion.
Posted 10 Years Ago
One of the things I like about this poem is that it is quite compact, yet speaks volumes and evokes a lot of emotion.
As 'just a poem' it has deep pathos and a raw and bitter taste to it.
Posted 10 Years Ago
As 'just a poem' it has deep pathos and a raw and bitter taste to it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love your sarcasm and attitude in this poem! Also, it kind of reminds me of a song called 'Thank You' by Simple Plan :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
I love your sarcasm and attitude in this poem! Also, it kind of reminds me of a song called 'Thank You' by Simple Plan :)
10 Years Ago
Not familiar with that song. I will have to listen to it.
10 Years Ago
You should :) it's like pop/punk if you're into that sorta thing
10 Years Ago
Everything but country baby. :)
10 Years Ago
Ahh, with me it's everything but hip-hop and rap lol :)
but a good poem...
and insightful...relationships work much better when we don't have expectations. or get together out of need...it should be out of want, love, and acceptance of who the other person is...
Posted 10 Years Ago
but a good poem...
and insightful...relationships work much better when we don't have expectations. or get together out of need...it should be out of want, love, and acceptance of who the other person is...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on December 18, 2013
Last Updated on August 29, 2016
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Lyn Anderson Toronto, Ontario, Canada
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