a word

this changes everything

a call,
a voice
from
the past.

I said
maybe,
at first,
and then,
you held me.

I decided
to say
no,
instead.

One
little
word,
says
it all.

Reviews

[Ruth]

What a deliverance! Really good...not much more can be said...this is excellent x

[ron]

I like how simple this is. It says so much in a short poem.

[Lyn Anderson]

That is the idea, and thank you.

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[jane7z]

Very nice KL love your writing succinct and yet powerful

[Neville]

This was a delight to read. Word perfect, no less. Nuff said, God bless, N

[MoriartyMesa]

Some of this felt like there maybe have pauses missing between the emotion and muse of work. I hate to say but another read through might be needed,what!

[Lyn Anderson]

not specific enough, but thanks for reading.

[Lyn Anderson]

I gave it a go - such as it is, with vague guidance take it as you will.

[Sami Khalil]

Maybe, yes , or the dreded no says it all...The power of that...A splendid poem...:)...................