For Neville

I just had to!

A little birdie told me
Blymie!
you don't like
rhymie
poetry

And so dear
Neville
because
I am a lass
may hap a
smart a*s -
perhaps a
devil,

I feel the fire,
a burning desire
indeed a need
to take no heed
of your admonitions
nor your presuppositions
and converse
in verse

until your brain does
bleed!

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ha! KLG I could not have put it better myself; nice little back at ya piece in a humorous vein.

[Lyn Anderson]

Funny part is, I am primarily a non-rhyming poet, as you have obviously seen, however, I just have this thing, when someone says something I perceive as narrow minded, I feel the urge to turn it on its head. I really had fun with this trilogy, and have gone out on a limb, hoping that I am making more friends than enemies :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i'm also not so much a rhyme fan...but love what you have done with it in these pieces...

smooth move in a rhyme groove.