No resuscitating

No resuscitating

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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Sometimes the paddles just aren't enough

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When will you take the hint?

We are way past debating
There is no resuscitating
After this separating
I don't blame you for trying
But after all your lying
I decided
I was tired of being derided
How many ways can I say it
There is only one way to play it
Get it through your head
The cat got your side of the bed.






© 2016 Lyn Anderson


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Replacing a cat with another one I feel is your easy and fast-forward business of bed-life imagining of course or real if you are realistic...:).................

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Nah, don't like rap either, sorry but others will love it I'm sure. Neville

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Lyn Anderson

10 Years Ago

I don't get the rap thing. I have gotten that comment twice on two different pieces from two differe.. read more
Neville

10 Years Ago

When I read it in my head, it smacked of rap. When I said it loud, it sounded like rap. Like I said .. read more
Oh I am all for p***y getting it's own way lol!
Flowing and descriptive with a pinch of venom.

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Love it word usage is witty and while a serious topic you are able to add a touch of humor at the end ?

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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

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