Off the cuff

eclectic cultism and a little joke between newly acquainted writers!

Off the cuff
and straight
to the page
fingers tapping
clacking
he makes
her laugh
he makes
her cry
her makes
her think
about days
gone by -
inspiration
a world away
he even
made her
think of that
awful
damned tree -
tag
you
are in it

le petit ville
the eclectic
Good cult

follow
me
she said
and
he did it

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

We do follow or lead( in many awkward or real situations ) and you have shared on of them ...Bravo

[Lydia Shutter]

The staccato lines give an urgency and a devil-may-care attitude to your words. I have a feeling this is about something only you and one other person understand. I liked the rhyming. Oh, and if he makes you laugh, keep him around. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Not so much 'off the cuff' as inspired, driven to reflect the luminosity someone has shone upon your soul. Nice flowing piece KLG

[Lyn Anderson]

How about Running out the Door? Having fun dancing on the run freezing cold feeling bold apparently not so old after all!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Sounds good!

[writing mojo]

I like the rapid fire tone of this ricocheting piece, makes me want to wear Kevlar and take my heart off my sleeve...great write

[Neville]

You really are damned good KLGoode & yes indeed I really am here, there & everywhere. This is precious and will be consigned to my favourites of which as yet, I have only one .... N

[Lyn Anderson]

Private jokes as it were lost on the general public. And do I care? Hell no:)

[Neville]

Do I? Nah...