Segali

Another poem for Segal (You made me feel Poetry)

Segali -
a musical
sound
i did not know
how to spell.
violetas,
violets -
said she
and how fitting
for a girl
my Segali.
violetas
violets -
lush,
delicate,
they seem
to cry
love me!
but it is something
you do
quite willingly
violetas,
violets -
just like my
Segali

Reviews

[Neville]

Literally quite beautiful & demonstrating not only a diversity of literary skill but also the ability to take and compelling nature of risk taking I believe we share... Neville

[Kleio13]

hahaha i find this poem romantically funny. I enjoy your repetitions and how you do not over use them. The personification that you passionately deliver because someone made you feel poetry is quite interesting