We sit, knees almost touching on a couch we picked out together a million miles a million lies a million angry fictions a million hurts a million strangled desires a million wouldas couldas shouldas In the two inch gap between us on that damned ugly couch
This has pathos buried in the upholstery! It depicts the disappointment of having put our faith in someone and then living each day to regret it and yet having to share our space with them. Resentment on the sofa!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
You used that word a lot with me. I am a lot less bitter now.
Sometimes inches can feel like a million miles. Nice flow of thoughts create good vision and allowed the reader to feel the need and the frustration. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Good to see these comments, better late than never, must have been when I was on hiatus.
Pretty awesome, reading these old comments. I don't know, must have been when I skipped out for a wh.. read morePretty awesome, reading these old comments. I don't know, must have been when I skipped out for a while.
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