a million miles

a million miles

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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sometimes it isn't distance that separates us.

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We sit, knees almost touching
on a couch
we picked out together
a million miles
a million lies
a million angry fictions
a million hurts
a million strangled desires
a million
wouldas
couldas
shouldas
In the two inch gap
between us
on that
damned
ugly
couch



© 2016 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
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Another old one. I understand this one too.
Good poem. Years later, that distance is a good thing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Yup. and the couch went to the dog -- and soon, out the door.:)
I probably could not put it any more eloquently than Vidya, so why bother? I aim to just keep reading.

All Good Things,

N

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

The one good thing about organizing my old writes is I get to look at these comments
sometimes life does'nt turn out how we expect and a footstep distance can feel like miles.Wonderful poem .

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Good to reorganize and see you again.
This has pathos buried in the upholstery! It depicts the disappointment of having put our faith in someone and then living each day to regret it and yet having to share our space with them. Resentment on the sofa!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

You used that word a lot with me. I am a lot less bitter now.
Sometimes inches can feel like a million miles. Nice flow of thoughts create good vision and allowed the reader to feel the need and the frustration. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Good to see these comments, better late than never, must have been when I was on hiatus.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Me too. Always running behind dear friend.
I liked how simple this was, it was interesting to read!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thanks, 2 years late.
sometimes two inches is really a mile, isn't it?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Pretty awesome, reading these old comments. I don't know, must have been when I skipped out for a wh.. read more

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Added on November 28, 2013
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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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