You made me feel poetry

You made me feel poetry

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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her name is Segal - it means violets.

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You made me feel poetry
to dream
to grasp a falling star
the music
swelling
filling
the rooms of my mind
the intensity
the purity
violets in the spring time
a glittering gem
from an ocean
imagined
too far.
across a world you came to me
you loved me
You made me feel poetry
transcending
space/
time
You made me your friend.



© 2016 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
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What a refreshing write. Any one who has loved can associate with this poem.
A fine use of imagery.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thank you. It is simple, and it is one of the reasons I still like it today.
We all have our inspirations. This one was a nice feeling.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting. I have some new writing, I just felt like revisiting.
Thank you for bringing me to this one, it's lovely.
I've not read it before.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

I have decided to go back and do this to feature some of my faves.
life and relationships should be so smooth ...what a precious gift this friendship is! a feel good poem that has made me feel Goode ;)
E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I appreciate that.
You really felt the poetry here, KL.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate the visit.
One of my favorite poems of yours that I've read so far. This tastes like a piece of tiramisu . . . very sweet, with a little huskiness of coffee, and many interesting layers! *yum! yum!*

Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I do appreciate.
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V
A lovely piece with a lot of delightful images. I can relate to some lines, which make your lines a treasure to my mind. I particularly like:"You made me feel poetry
transcending
space/
time
You made me your friend". So nice.


Posted 8 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much. It is one of my favourites for one of my best friends.
V

8 Years Ago

That's nice. :)
I picked a random poem I posted 3 years ago, but wrote in 1990, because I love this person, and I was feeling sappy. People on this site always want what's new, but something doesn't have to be new to be enjoyed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely piece, elegantly worded. Nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your review (2 years late)
A beautiful poem for friendship and poetry. I have many writers who make me want to read and create. I like the positive feel of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much. Way late. But heartfelt, nonetheless.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

Always my pleasure to read your words and you are welcome my friend.

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Added on November 25, 2013
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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