icy fingers the joints swollen blue and purple a sinister rainbow basking in the shadow of death I felt him inside me crawling scraping at the walls of my mind
Death is in and around us all the time, lurking at the periphery of our vision or at the back of our minds. Death cares not for our struggles, our feelings, our loves, our lives. Death comes whether we are ready or not.
Once again, a brilliant poem that conjures images of the darkness waiting for us all. Well done.
Now this is my kind of poetry. Again, your descriptions are so vivid it's open up my mind's eye.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
why thank you - I thoroughly enjoyed yours and will have to read more - of mine I have posted, try S.. read morewhy thank you - I thoroughly enjoyed yours and will have to read more - of mine I have posted, try Shades of Red and naked feet - maybe Monsters under the bed too - Cheers.
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