Some Healthy Cooking

Some Healthy Cooking

A Poem by Amely

Want to cook with me?
                                 Can I crack the eggs?
Sure. Why not?
                                 Can I lick the spoon?

Okay. (Since you smiled at me like that.)
   
But I get to do the stirring.
                          Can I watch?
No but you can fetch the oil.
              You want the sugar, too?

Who's gonna get the mess…
              Can we figure that out later?
I already pre-heated the oven….
    I noticed.
ready in  five…
         Four…
    Three…
  Two…

ONE

© 2008 Amely


Author's Note

Amely
I just wanted a cooking partner, okay?? ;P and I've been experimenting with structure.

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Cah
You've been on a cuteness kick is what you've been on. Do, do, do keep up the structure games. It looks good on you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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