Catch Me

come here
catch me
in a butterfly net
set me free
in his mind
for a moment
so i can see
naked thoughts
before they hide
behind his words
and get shy
or lost
so lift me up
through his eyes
'cause I'm so tired
of climbing walls
and I'm aching
from hanging on
and I don't want to fall
from the edge of this bluff
and I don't want to run
so catch me
come on

 

Reviews

[Cah]

Nicely done.

"'cause I'm so tired
of climbing walls
and I'm aching
from hanging on
and I don't want to fall
from the edge of this bluff
and I don't want to run
so catch me
come on"

All of this is smile makingly good.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Nicely written, words flow smoothly and a vision of hanging on is painted.

Thanks for entering my contest and the best of luck.

[Pakino]

I feel like I am being chased :) haha nice...